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    Please rate the lyrics to the song I've written!

    BALLAD OF THE BROKEN HEART
    You were my soul
    You were my life
    You’re cutting me
    Like a knife

    I thought that I had seen the light
    Holding on to you so tight
    I wish that you’d come back to me
    I was blind, but now I see

    I wish that I had seen the signs
    Before your hand slipped from mines
    My heart is breaking everyday
    Wishing my pain away

    You said I meant
    Nothing to you
    But since you’ve gone
    My heart’s in two

    When you’re around, my nerves were shot
    From the start your love I’ve sought
    At the start I was so shy
    Without your love I thought I’d die
    When I asked you to be mine
    I never thought I’d crossed the line

    I thought that I had seen the light
    Holding on to you so tight
    I wish that you’d come back to me
    I was blind, but now I see

    I wish that I had seen the signs
    Before your hand slipped from mines
    My heart is breaking everyday
    Wishing my pain away

    I wish you would
    Walk through my door
    And things would be
    As they were before

    I thought that I had seen the light
    Holding on to you so tight
    I wish that you’d come back to me
    I was blind, but now I see

    I wish that I had seen the signs
    Before your hand slipped from mines
    My heart is breaking everyday
    Wishing my pain away


    Thanks!

  2. #2
    great lyrics ! just keep working because you got talent!

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